Wolfeypaw

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A Bit About You

Out of Character Name∙Wolfheart
Chatango Username ∙Wolfstar35
Contact Information ∙ pm
Other Characters You Play ∙none
Time Zone ∙ Eastern
How You Found Us ∙ a friend

Introductions

Character’s Name ∙
Wolfeypaw (Wolfeyclaw as a warrior)
Age ∙ 6 moons
Gender ∙ female
Residing ∙ SkyClan
Character Type ∙ Warrior apprentice

Mindset

Overall Personality ∙ Wolfeypaw is a good hunter and cares for her Clan more than anything else. She is a fast runner, so fast in fact that she axidentally over ran a rabbit. Her generouse personalitiy is loved by most of her Clan. Racoonpaw, her best friend, always trains with her and act like littermates. One day Wolfeypaw will be a fast and brave SkyClan warrior and will look at her Clan with heart.
Dispite her heart, Wolfeypaw will battle to the death if she has to. Her teeth are razzor sharp so she can give her victum a day to remember. Her claws, when out, are very long and will only use them for selfdefence. Although she has a big heart, she can get short tempard and can lash out at her Clanmates. Though even after that she is always forgiven because she is forgiveing.
Additional Tidbits ∙ Her favorite food is bird.

Reflection

Overall Appearance ∙ Wolfeypaw is a longhaired breed with a thick brown coat and almost strait back. She has a ragged pelt, though it is sofer than it looks. Her ears are huge and are pointed high up with darker brown tips. Her muzzle is long and a darker shade of brown with sort whiskers. When there is some sort of light gets in her bright yellow eyes, they glow like the moon.
Because of her brown coat she can blend in with the forest trees real well. Though out in the open her coats a bit obviouse so it can be hard to stalk. Wolfeypaw however has found a way to crouch down really low and deiscise her self as dirt to color blind animals. Her paws are large and can hurt her opponents badley if she wants to, also because of her long claws. Ocasoinaly, other cats have mistaken Wolfeypaw as an actual Wolf cub than a cat.

Backstory

Family History ∙ -opt-out-
Family ∙
Mother-Frostwing
Father-Jaguartail
Sister-Leopardpaw
Birthplace ∙ SkyClan's boarder.
Background ∙ Wolfeypaw's mother, frostwing, was out hunting with the patrol in the early afternoon. Dapplemist has been complaining for days that she should move to the nurserey, but Frostwing had refused. While stalking a mouse, she fell into intense pain and gave birth near the Clan's boarder. She had given birth to two kits, Wolfeykit and Leopardkit. However Frostwing has always been worried about Wolfeypaw's short temper.
Ever scince she was born, Wolfeypaw is a go getter. Before she was a paw' she coutlessley got introuble with both Frostwing and Thunderstar. She would always persewayde her brother to sneak out of camp and explore. Though many times they were always cought right before they got to the camp entrence, mainley by Dapplemist. The Medicine Cat still keeps a close eye on her and Leopardpaw.
Actualy, while Wolfeypaw was a kit, Racoonpaw snuck them out of camp so she could teach the two kits a hunting lesson. She tought them how to stalk rabbits. When Wolfeykit thought she had it down ,she tried to capture one when she first spoted it. The rabbit had no idea she was comeing, well untill she over ran the prey and hit a tree. Leopardpaw and Racoonpaw still bother till this day. Well if she was raceing the rabbit maybe it would have turned out different.
About a moon after she ran into the tree, Thunderstar called a Clan meeting. Just days ago new kits arived in the nurserey, though their mother dosen't exactley like Wolfeykit that much. Wolfeykit wounderd if the meeting was about the kit's or not but she was excited anyways. She rushed out to the Sky rock as fast as lightning. Thunderstar looked at her with a smile and anounced "there are two kit's old enough to become apprentices."
"It's my turn now" Wolfeykit whispered "I'm going to be an apprentice." Wolfeykit stared at thuderstar anxousley as the great SkyClan leader looked down at her.
"Wolfeykit, Leopardkit please come forward." Thunderstar anounced, Though Leopardkit was already beside him.
Wolfeykit rolled her eyes and leaped onto the Sky Rock. She padded right next to Thunderstar with excitement. Thuderstar smiled at her and looked at the Clan.
"Wolfeykit and Leopardkit are now six moons old ," Thunderstar began, he turned to the two kits. " Do you promise to uphold the warrior code?"
" Yes." They replied.
" Well then, as I look up at our warrior ansesters, I Thunderstar leader of SkyClan look at these two young kits. Leopardkit, from this day forward until you get your warrior name you will be known as Leopardpaw"
"Leopardpaw, Leopardpaw" Cheared the Clan as Lepardpaw leaped for joy. Thunderstar stteled the crowd with a lift of his paw.
" Wolfeykit, from this day forward until you get your warrior name you will be known as Wolfeypaw."
"Wolfeypaw, Wolfeypaw!" The Clan cheared. Wolfeypaw was now an apprentice.

Sample -opt out-

Contract

By submitting this application, I am also stating that I have read, and understood, the forum rules, and that I agree to follow them. This means that I will take whatever punishments come my way should I break the rules.

--Wolfheart

[xXWolfsongXx]

Sorry, but we already have a "Wolf"...could you choose a different name?
Admin.

[Brightface]

Besides your name, there are other problems with your bio:

1. If your character is an apprentice, why is she residing in the nursery?

2. I don't think "Scary huh." is acceptable as a fifth sentence of your first appearance paragraph. Maybe you can describe the feel of her pelt, the shape of her eyes, etc.

3. Something to think about: Cats are much smaller than wolves, so it's very unlikely that she could be mistaken for one.

4. You left out the Backstory and Sample sections of your bio - you need to fill them out

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[b]Family History ∙ [/b]This (optional) segment really applies more to leaders than to apprentices or kits, though all who wish to do so may fill it out. Family history, in many cases, has at least a small hand in making a character who they are; if this is the case in your situation, this section is advised.
WARNING - Just because this particular segment is optional, does not mean that you do not have to do the other segments of the Backstory - because you do. If you delete this section, your biography will not be accepted.
[b]Family ∙ [/b]Parents, spouse, siblings, children, etc.
[b]Birthplace ∙ [/b]Please be as specific as you can. If it’s outside of the forest, remember to state the place name and country. Locations within sight of the forest are fine on their own, however characters residing within the city should be more specific.
[b]Background ∙ [/b]This section is the character’s background, and as such is mandatory. We ask that it be at least four large paragraphs – around 350 words total – detailing key events in your character’s life, explaining how they became who they are, and just giving us an idea of their history. The administrators reserve the right to ask for more if they deem it necessary.

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Except in the case of canon roles (such as adoption or high positions [Leader, Deputy, etc]), this section is an optional one, though if you suspect it would help to give a better idea of your character, please include it. Sample post should meet all of Cats of All Clans’ posting guidelines, and should be written as the character being registered.
DO NOT DELETE, even if you are not doing a biography sample.


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Ok I think I've changed evrything you've said. I just hope I left nothing out.

[Deleted]

How id this uncompleate?

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Sigh... I'll guess I'll hang around till my character is accepted...