Honeyclaws bio

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A Bit About You

Your Name ∙ Alex
Out of Character Name ∙
Chatango Username ∙ loftieralex
Contact Information ∙
Other Characters You Play ∙ none
Time Zone ∙ Eastern
How You Found Us ∙ Google

Introductions

Character’s Name ∙ Honeyclaw
Age ∙ 10 moons
Gender ∙ she-cat
Residing ∙ Riverclan
Character Type ∙ warrior

Mindset

Overall Personality ∙ Honeyclaw is loyal and has a long temper, around smart cats she seems to not really care but it annoys her a tad bit. around mouse brain cats she seems to be like a mother to them and explain every thing till they get it right! When she is near people she likes she loves to teas them around people she doesn't like she seems to ignore them alot. Honeyclaw loves to hunt but when she is interupted on a hunt she goes all off on the poor cat that had to interupt! She prefers to fight than go and send a message to her clan. When she sees strangers she gets interrested.

When she meats someone new she asks a lot of questions. When any thing small except prey she seems to think of a way to save it. If there is a cat injured from another clan instead of chaseing it off she brings it back to camp to get patched up. If its a baby fox she would normally puts it out of the clan land. If something threatns her she tries to find a way to not fight even if there is no chance of that happening. Under panic and stress she seems to stay calm when most other cats don't.
Additional Tidbits ∙ This section is simply for the random little additional information that you can’t think to cram in elsewhere. You may present it in paragraph form, as a list, or not at all.

Reflection

Overall Appearance ∙ Honeyclaw has a tan pelt with a white chest and one white paw. Her fur is short and silky her nose is a kind of pink color, her ears have little tufts of fur on the top. Honeyclaw is weak looking but if you meet her in battle you would be wrong! You can't see her musculesunder her pelt it makes her have the upper hand sometimes. Honeyclaws eyes are blue which is strange for tan cats her teeth compair to normal cats and her mouth is the same. The thing that stands out from Honeyclaw is her eyes and her one white paw. Her size is kind off small and weak looking.

Her paws are small, and her claws are rather long. She has sorta long legs that make her perfect at jumping. Her whiskers are black which is rather stricking to see on a tan cat. Her tail is long and she has a white underbelly. Her underbelly and the tip of her tail have black spots. At the end of her tail she has a tuft of fur.

Backstory

Family History ∙ Honeyclaws mom featherwhisker fell in love with a shadowclan cat when she was injured and honeyclaws dad smokefur helped featherwhisker back to her camp. The clan thought smokefur had injured featherwhisker and took him captage. featherwhisker would sneak to smokefur and they would secretly talk first it was just talk as friends than it became more. After a while featherwhisker was expeting kits! the clan leader bugged her so much to say who the father was but she never told.
Family ∙ mother-featherwhisker riverclan. father- stormfur. sister:mosspaw. brother:stormkit
Birthplace ∙ Riverclan Nursery
Background ∙ when honeyclaw was honeykit she was a very shy kit she didn't like talking to warrior because she thought if she made them mad she would flatten her!! the most impacting time when she was a kit was when her brother stormkit died from greencough. At first she thought her brother was just playing hide and seek but after a few days honeykit got worried. After a while news about kits from a gathering from thunderclan was spreading around camp. Honeykit thought that stormkit went to join thunderclan. Honeyclaw begged her mother to let her join thunderclan. After a while her mom got so sad for honeykit that she told honeykit that stormkit died from greencough. Honeyclaw was so struck with greif that she almost never left the nursery intill her sister mosskit made her come out when they were almost five moons old. After mosskit made her come out honeykit really wanted to get out and explore! After one moon passed she was ready to be a apprentice! Featherwhisker groomed mosskit and honeykit for so long and told them what joy it would to be apprentices! Mosskit went crazy and ruffled her fur so much she had to be groomed a second time, but honeykit oh honeykit was greifing on the inside she thought" oh stormkit i hope starclan is makeing you a apprentice after ceromony honeypaw and mosspaw were showed around the territory by the mentors. mosspaw had mousestep and honeypaw had brightclaw. Honeypaw learned fast mosspaw was kind off a slow learner. after a few moons of good training. After a while honeypaw and mosspaw went to there first gathering! There first gathering wasn't a big pleasure when they got there shadowclan were skiny and ungroomed which ment trouble. The shadowclan leader has accused riverclan of stealing prey. After a two days shadowclan tried to attack riverlcan honeypaw was selected to fight and so was mosspaw but when they were there honeypaw was sent to get more warriors honeypaw was steamed and worried. she was worried about her sisiter and steamed she wouldn't be there for a while to help her sister. when she got back her sister was bleeding batly from a bite on her back leg. Furious honeypaw streaked forward and attacked the cat that was rounding on mosspaw. honeypaw did well in battle but when they got back mosspaw was really hurt and so close to leaf bear too. While waiting for mosspaw to heal leaf bear came around. A outbreak of greencough hit the camp. featherwhisker had the worst case of all mosspaw was so struck with greif that mosspaw stayed with featherwhisker all the time. sooner or later mosspaw caught greencough but still stayed with featherwhisker. after a while the med cat couldn't do any more for featherwhisker. honeypaw was so so so struck with greif that she than stayed with mosspaw. With all there efforts mosspaw died in sleep next to honeypaw. When honeypaw was made warrior she had kinda forgoten about mosspaw because she was so excited. Honeypaw finally got her warrior name! "Honeyclaw" all the clan yowled!!

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--Honeyclaw

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Hi! Welcome to COAC! Its so nice to see new faces (:

Okay so first and foremost, you need to remove the blue. It is too hard for me too read the bio.

Second, your bio isn't in the correct coding. The coding is all the writing in brackets that is on the bio form.

Third, make sure you appearance and personality have two STRONG paragraphs each

Lastly, for family, we ask that you just list her family. Ex. Mother-Featherwhisker

[Thinking of you ♥]

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[center][size=4][b]A Bit About You[/b][/size][/center]
[b]Your Name ∙ [/b] Alex
[b]Out of Character Name ∙[/b]
[b]Chatango Username ∙[/b]  loftieralex
[b]Contact Information ∙ [/b]
[b]Other Characters You Play ∙[/b] none
[b]Time Zone ∙[/b] Eastern
[b]How You Found Us ∙[/b] Google

[center][size=4][b]Introductions[/b][/size][/center]
[b]Character’s Name[/b] ∙ Honeyclaw
[b]Age ∙[/b] 10 moons
[b]Gender ∙[/b] she-cat
[b]Residing ∙[/b] Riverclan
[b]Character Type[/b] ∙ warrior

[center][size=4][b]Mindset[/b][/size][/center]
[b]Overall Personality ∙[/b] Honeyclaw is loyal and has a long temper, around smart cats she seems to not really care but it annoys her a tad bit. around mouse brain cats she seems to be like a mother to them and explain every thing till they get it right! When she is near people she likes she loves to teas them around people she doesn't like she seems to ignore them alot. Honeyclaw loves to hunt but when she is interupted on a hunt she goes all off on the poor cat that had to interupt! She prefers to fight than go and send a message to her clan. When she sees strangers she gets interrested.

When she meats someone new she asks a lot of questions. When any thing small except prey she seems to think of a way to save it. If there is a cat injured from another clan instead of chaseing it off she brings it back to camp to get patched up. If its a baby fox she would normally puts it out of the clan land. If something threatns her she tries to find a way to not fight even if there is no chance of that happening. Under panic and stress she seems to stay calm when most other cats don't.
[b]Additional Tidbits ∙[/b] This section is simply for the random little additional information that you can’t think to cram in elsewhere. You may present it in paragraph form, as a list, or not at all.

[center][size=4][b]Reflection[/b][/size][/center]
[b]Overall Appearance ∙ [/b]Honeyclaw has a tan pelt with a white chest and one white paw. Her fur is short and silky her nose is a kind of pink color, her ears have little tufts of fur on the top. Honeyclaw is weak looking but if you meet her in battle you would be wrong! You can't see her musculesunder her pelt it makes her have the upper hand sometimes. Honeyclaws eyes are blue which is strange for tan cats her teeth compair to normal cats and her mouth is the same. The thing that stands out from Honeyclaw is her eyes and her one white paw. Her size is kind off small and weak looking.

Her paws are small, and her claws are rather long. She has sorta long legs that make her perfect at jumping. Her whiskers are black which is rather stricking to see on a tan cat. Her tail is long and she has a white underbelly. Her underbelly and the tip of her tail have black spots. At the end of her tail she has a tuft of fur.

[center][size=4][b]Backstory[/b][/size][/center]
[b]Family History ∙ [/b]Honeyclaws mom featherwhisker fell in love with a shadowclan cat when she was injured and honeyclaws dad smokefur helped featherwhisker back to her camp. The clan thought smokefur had injured featherwhisker and took him captage. featherwhisker would sneak to smokefur and they would secretly talk first it was just talk as friends than it became more. After a while featherwhisker was expeting kits! the clan leader bugged her so much to say who the father was but she never told.
[b]Family ∙ [/b]mother-featherwhisker riverclan. father- stormfur. sister:mosspaw. brother:stormkit
[b]Birthplace ∙ [/b] Riverclan Nursery
[b]Background ∙ [/b]when honeyclaw was honeykit she was a very shy kit she didn't like talking to warrior because she thought if she made them mad she would flatten her!! the most impacting time when she was a kit was when her brother stormkit died from greencough. At first she thought her brother was just playing hide and seek but after a few days honeykit got worried. After a while news about kits from a gathering from thunderclan was spreading around camp. Honeykit thought that stormkit went to join thunderclan. Honeyclaw begged her mother to let her join thunderclan. After a while her mom got so sad for honeykit that she told honeykit that stormkit died from greencough. Honeyclaw was so struck with greif that she almost never left the nursery intill her sister mosskit made her come out when they were almost five moons old. After mosskit made her come out honeykit really wanted to get out and explore! After one moon passed she was ready to be a apprentice! Featherwhisker groomed mosskit and honeykit for so long and told them what joy it would to be apprentices! Mosskit went crazy and ruffled her fur so much she had to be groomed a second time, but honeykit oh honeykit was greifing on the inside she thought" oh stormkit i hope starclan is makeing you a apprentice after ceromony honeypaw and mosspaw were showed around the territory by the mentors. mosspaw had mousestep and honeypaw had brightclaw. Honeypaw learned fast mosspaw was kind off a slow learner. after a few moons of good training. After a while honeypaw and mosspaw went to there first gathering! There first gathering wasn't a big pleasure when they got there shadowclan were skiny and ungroomed which ment trouble. The shadowclan leader has accused riverclan of stealing fish. After a two days shadowclan tried to attack riverlcan honeypaw was selected to fight and so was mosspaw but when they were there honeypaw was sent to get more warriors honeypaw was steamed and worried. she was worried about her sisiter and steamed she wouldn't be there for a while to help her sister. when she got back her sister was bleeding batly from a bite on her back leg. Furious honeypaw streaked forward and attacked the cat that was rounding on mosspaw. honeypaw did well in battle but when they got back mosspaw was really hurt and so close to leaf bear too. While waiting for mosspaw to heal leaf bear came around. A outbreak of greencough hit the camp. featherwhisker had the worst case of all mosspaw was so struck with greif that mosspaw stayed with featherwhisker all the time. sooner or later mosspaw caught greencough but still stayed with featherwhisker. after a while the med cat couldn't do any more for featherwhisker. honeypaw was so so so struck with greif that she than stayed with mosspaw. With all there efforts mosspaw died in sleep next to honeypaw. When honeypaw was made warrior she had kinda forgoten about mosspaw because she was so excited. Honeypaw finally got her warrior name! "Honeyclaw" all the clan yowled!!

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[center][size=4][b]Contract[/b][/size][/center]
[i]By submitting this application, I am also stating that I have read, and understood, the forum rules, and that I agree to follow them. This means that I will take whatever punishments come my way should I break the rules.[/i]

--[b]Honeyclaw[/b][/blockquote]

Just copy and paste what is above^^ I already inserted everything, so all you have to do is copy it (:

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YOUR APPLICATION IS
ACCEPTED

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woohoo!! xD