Post by Deleted on Apr 19, 2010 17:21:12 GMT -5
i wrote this story a while ago and if the main character seems familiar one of my charries on here is based on the main one in my story but different species. But anyways please don't copy my story thanks.
Willow stepped out of the shade into the moonlight. A twig snapped and she whirled around snarling and jumped onto a brown wolf. He snarled back at her. She pinned him down, he was small, a younger wolf who had green eyes. Willow sank her claws into his flesh and he yelped.
Suddenly she was knocked over with a thud. Willow got up angrily and glared at her new attacker. It was a golden furred wolf, bigger than the one she was just attacking. He pinned her down and spat in her face. She snarled at him, “Get off of me you idiot!” Then she clawed his face making him stagger back. Now was her chance. In flash Willow had raced over to the golden wolf and bit his furry leg. She sank her jaws into it until she tasted the thick salty liquid that flowed down his leg and down her neck. The dog howled in pain and then whoosh! The next thing she new she was on the ground. The brown wolf growled in her face and she saw more wolves coming. Next time Willow don’t challenge a wolf pack alone.
She got up and ran off with oh, say about 50 other wolves after her. One lunged itself at her tripping her over. Willow caught herself though and kept on running. Then she stopped. In front of her was a mountain of rocks and boulders. Oh boy. She started climbing and kicking rocks down on the wolves behind her or more like below her. She reached the top and looked down. The entire wolf pack stared up at her. The alpha female looked at Willow and dipped her head meaning: You were foolish to challenge us but brave. Leave now and we will not go after you. It’s like a peace treaty, a trade actually. Willow dipped her head and turned around. She cautiously tapped each stone before stepping on it, just in case they weren’t stable. Willow started to work her way down when suddenly a rock tumbled down and fell on her leg, crushing it. I made that sound a lot more peaceful than it was you know. She howled in agony.
That was a mistake. Willow heard a vicious snarl from near by and too late did she realize that there was a cave on her far right, a bear cave. "Oh you've got to be kidding me!" She hissed through bared teeth as she saw a giant mass of brown fur stomp out of the cave. She struggled to get her foot out but it was no use the bear had already made its way to her and was now about to swipe its ginormous paw at her which would probably free her foot and leave her tumbling down. Willow growled trying to look as scary as she could but she knew she was no match for a bear. The hairy beast swung it massive paw at her, its claws sliced her right eye and she let out a shriek. The move caused her to fall, freeing her foot just as she predicted. She managed to catch herself, sliding on some of the rocks. She lunged for the bear and bit a clump of its fur and raked her claws into it. The bear roared and threw her off. Willow landed against a giant rock and fell to the ground limp. She watched the bear advance on her, it was going to finish her off and she couldn't do anything to stop it.....
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Shiama heard a roar, so did the deer he was hunting. Great now what am I going to eat for dinner? Dirt? He shuddered then froze as he heard a shriek of agony pierce the skies. He sniffed the air and smelled danger, a bear. With a growl he ran off towards the bear's scent and stopped dead when he came to a mound of rocks near a bear cave. On the far left he saw the bear preparing for her kill and noticed a small white wolf lying at the foot of the boulder, looking up helplessly. Instinct made his legs move and a snarl ripped from his throat as he burst out of the safety of the shadows and lunged on top of the bear. The bear seemed shocked and stumbled over. Shiama clawed its eyes and managed to blind the creature. He lost his balance and fell over to the ground but jumped back up to face his attacker. But then he heard the sound of death. Crows above them cawed, a warning sound to all other animals. Humans were hunting and they were close. The bear began to run off to hide in its cave.
Shiama turned around to the wolf to find that it was still breathing but was no longer awake. Another gun fire sounded, closer this time. Shiama would've left but he couldn't just leave one of his own kind. So he picked up the wolf by its fur and carried/dragged it off....
Willow stepped out of the shade into the moonlight. A twig snapped and she whirled around snarling and jumped onto a brown wolf. He snarled back at her. She pinned him down, he was small, a younger wolf who had green eyes. Willow sank her claws into his flesh and he yelped.
Suddenly she was knocked over with a thud. Willow got up angrily and glared at her new attacker. It was a golden furred wolf, bigger than the one she was just attacking. He pinned her down and spat in her face. She snarled at him, “Get off of me you idiot!” Then she clawed his face making him stagger back. Now was her chance. In flash Willow had raced over to the golden wolf and bit his furry leg. She sank her jaws into it until she tasted the thick salty liquid that flowed down his leg and down her neck. The dog howled in pain and then whoosh! The next thing she new she was on the ground. The brown wolf growled in her face and she saw more wolves coming. Next time Willow don’t challenge a wolf pack alone.
She got up and ran off with oh, say about 50 other wolves after her. One lunged itself at her tripping her over. Willow caught herself though and kept on running. Then she stopped. In front of her was a mountain of rocks and boulders. Oh boy. She started climbing and kicking rocks down on the wolves behind her or more like below her. She reached the top and looked down. The entire wolf pack stared up at her. The alpha female looked at Willow and dipped her head meaning: You were foolish to challenge us but brave. Leave now and we will not go after you. It’s like a peace treaty, a trade actually. Willow dipped her head and turned around. She cautiously tapped each stone before stepping on it, just in case they weren’t stable. Willow started to work her way down when suddenly a rock tumbled down and fell on her leg, crushing it. I made that sound a lot more peaceful than it was you know. She howled in agony.
That was a mistake. Willow heard a vicious snarl from near by and too late did she realize that there was a cave on her far right, a bear cave. "Oh you've got to be kidding me!" She hissed through bared teeth as she saw a giant mass of brown fur stomp out of the cave. She struggled to get her foot out but it was no use the bear had already made its way to her and was now about to swipe its ginormous paw at her which would probably free her foot and leave her tumbling down. Willow growled trying to look as scary as she could but she knew she was no match for a bear. The hairy beast swung it massive paw at her, its claws sliced her right eye and she let out a shriek. The move caused her to fall, freeing her foot just as she predicted. She managed to catch herself, sliding on some of the rocks. She lunged for the bear and bit a clump of its fur and raked her claws into it. The bear roared and threw her off. Willow landed against a giant rock and fell to the ground limp. She watched the bear advance on her, it was going to finish her off and she couldn't do anything to stop it.....
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Shiama heard a roar, so did the deer he was hunting. Great now what am I going to eat for dinner? Dirt? He shuddered then froze as he heard a shriek of agony pierce the skies. He sniffed the air and smelled danger, a bear. With a growl he ran off towards the bear's scent and stopped dead when he came to a mound of rocks near a bear cave. On the far left he saw the bear preparing for her kill and noticed a small white wolf lying at the foot of the boulder, looking up helplessly. Instinct made his legs move and a snarl ripped from his throat as he burst out of the safety of the shadows and lunged on top of the bear. The bear seemed shocked and stumbled over. Shiama clawed its eyes and managed to blind the creature. He lost his balance and fell over to the ground but jumped back up to face his attacker. But then he heard the sound of death. Crows above them cawed, a warning sound to all other animals. Humans were hunting and they were close. The bear began to run off to hide in its cave.
Shiama turned around to the wolf to find that it was still breathing but was no longer awake. Another gun fire sounded, closer this time. Shiama would've left but he couldn't just leave one of his own kind. So he picked up the wolf by its fur and carried/dragged it off....