Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2010 17:40:03 GMT -5
I wrote these two stories/ soft news articles last summer in a writing camp enjoy!
Hard news:
Lamb Comes To School
By
Willow
On Friday thirteenth, at Friendship Elementary, a little girl named Mary had broken almost all of the school rules for bringing a lamb to school. A once bright and sunny day became a chaotic catastrophe. A teacher had gotten a black eye while trying to force the lamb away from the school but the lamb wouldn’t budge.
After the incident at school Mary’s parents discovered a shocking explanation to the lamb’s odd behavior. Mary had forgotten to feed her lamb so it followed her to eat her lunch as payback. Though this is the truth many people still believe that the unfortunate events that had happened that day were due to the fact of it happening on the unlucky Friday thirteenth.
Soft news:
Lamb Comes to School
If you think you’ve had some embarrassing moments at school then that was nothing compared to Mary’s.
Poor little Mary had such an embarrassing day at school that she had moved far away. Being laughed at and going to the principle’s office with a lamb following you all day was too much for Mary to handle. Little Mary’s teacher had gotten a black eye when the stubborn lamb kicked him in the face as he was trying to get the lamb out of the Friendship Elementary school.
Some people believe that these unfortunate events are due to the unlucky thirteenth of Friday. They were proved wrong when Mary’s parents found out why the lamb came to school in the first place. Mary had forgotten to feed the lamb and so the little white lamb followed her to eat those homemade cookies in her lunchbox.
Hard news:
Lamb Comes To School
By
Willow
On Friday thirteenth, at Friendship Elementary, a little girl named Mary had broken almost all of the school rules for bringing a lamb to school. A once bright and sunny day became a chaotic catastrophe. A teacher had gotten a black eye while trying to force the lamb away from the school but the lamb wouldn’t budge.
After the incident at school Mary’s parents discovered a shocking explanation to the lamb’s odd behavior. Mary had forgotten to feed her lamb so it followed her to eat her lunch as payback. Though this is the truth many people still believe that the unfortunate events that had happened that day were due to the fact of it happening on the unlucky Friday thirteenth.
Soft news:
Lamb Comes to School
If you think you’ve had some embarrassing moments at school then that was nothing compared to Mary’s.
Poor little Mary had such an embarrassing day at school that she had moved far away. Being laughed at and going to the principle’s office with a lamb following you all day was too much for Mary to handle. Little Mary’s teacher had gotten a black eye when the stubborn lamb kicked him in the face as he was trying to get the lamb out of the Friendship Elementary school.
Some people believe that these unfortunate events are due to the unlucky thirteenth of Friday. They were proved wrong when Mary’s parents found out why the lamb came to school in the first place. Mary had forgotten to feed the lamb and so the little white lamb followed her to eat those homemade cookies in her lunchbox.