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[mosspaw]

Introductions

Character's Name ∙ Mosspath
Age ∙ 49 moons
Gender ∙ she cat
Residing ∙ ThunderClan
Character Type ∙ warrior


Mindset

Overall Personality ∙ Mosspath is a friendly cat who loves to make friends!She respects the warrior code but if nessacery will help out another clan. She is a warrior who would die to protect her clan mates! she likes to talk to ohters and would like to be clan leader one day. she feels that medacine cats are wise but very hard to talk to. This being said she does not talk to them unless neccecery to another ctas life or for advice.
Reflection

Overall Appearance ∙ Mosspath is a gray and white striped she cat. She is very strong and her mucles stick out a little trhough her coat. she has a shorter coat. Her limbs are very strong and long so she can run very fast and quietly. Her eyes are a soft blue colar and her wiskers are a pale white. Her nose is a nice pink.
Backstory

Family History: Mosspath was born to two cats that where not clan born. Mosspath is not proud of that and has never been comfortable talking abou ther past. Once she could walk and see shee left home. She was born in Leaf bear and was found half frozen and brought to the forest where she stayed in thunderClans camp. Mosspath is very loyall to the forest and has not seen her family since she left home. As an apprentice Mosspath would love to have play fights with clan mates and chase leaves pretending she was a heroic hunter saveing her clan. Moospath loved when the time came for her battle training. she liked the sandy hollow and felt close to her mentor. she did not like the concept of haveing to fight or kill if nedded another cat but did what she has to for the safty of her clan. She has been invited to one gathering and loveds the truce and htat she can talk to other clan cats with out gettin gin trouble. Of course she had a big mouth an dwas not invited to very many.

I have read and I understand the rules and I promise to follow them no matter what!
You can reatch me at [e-mail]!
MossPath:)

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Hey there, Moss. Thanks for joining and creating a character - however, we've got a few issues.

First thing first, if you take a look at the Character Central board (the very top sub-board, on the same page as where you found the Thunderclan Bios board), there's a sample Character Application. Please take a look at it and see how the application is supposed to look.

Then, go back to the thread where you found the application code, and copy all of the coding, and do not delete ANYTHING. Fill out all the fields, opt out on the ones (if you so choose) that allow that option, and then it'll get looked over. I look forward to critiquing it.

--Breezy