Post by spottedshadow on Jun 27, 2008 13:47:12 GMT -5
"drip drip drip" the rain splashed.
"it looks like a ballerina jumping and falling" said smoke.
even though smoke is a girl they named her that.she was sitting at the window that evening watching the storm.
"you are clueless" spat jay
"no im not" smoke spat back.
"rain meanscolder weather" jay spat walking up to smoke.
"soooooo" "sooo we might not go outside" " i will!" smoke said jumping down.she went over and scratched the door.
"OK" he yelled opening the door.she padded out.
"i think i will explore farther today" she said to herself as she padded away.
"GET AWAY" she heard a cat spit.she turned around to see windclan patrols."im just wondering around"she said in a weak voice crouched down with her tail between her legs."get out of here" they spat." "she cried as she ran farther till she reached a river where she stopped to drink."HISSSSSSSSs" she turned to see a riverclan warrior."please dont hurt me" she cried."please" she beg."just go away he spat.tail tucked she huried off.
she stopped at the sunning rocks."hello" she heard a voice.it sounded friendly but stern.she turned to seea apprentice of thunderclan."h-hi" her voice shaken by being so scared.
"you look like youve saw a ghost" she heard when she saw a warrior step up from behind the apprentice."i gotta go ill be right back" she said stepping back and she turned around and ran."should i trust them?" she thought.then "WHACK" she felt a paw hit her neck.it was a rogue cat.she yolwed and swung her paw and striked him in the cheek.he yolwed and "WHAM" the warrior she found earlier wacked him down."lets get you to the medicine" den the warrior said grabbing her by the scruff.
"the wound is deep but will heal." the medicine cat said putting meddicine on the wound.whats a kit like you doin wondering around here?what clan are you from?" the apprentice asked."im not from any clan and im can go outside." smoke meowed."your a kittypet!" the apprentice said eyes widened."i guess" she meowed with confusion.
"but i like it here better.""oh""well im off"she said standing but falling."your to weak yet young kit"the medicine cat meowed."well what do we have here?" the leader said steppping in."how about you stay here then.""REALLY"said smoke."yep but come"the leader said stepping out.the kit stammered and got up and folowed him.they stepped into the nursery."this is where you will sleep.""woooow" smoke meaowed.she went to sleep.while she slept the leader announced that there was a new kit."your new name is midnightkit"
few moons later
"tonight we are proud to make a kit a apprentice."the leader annownced."midnightkit was your old name but for now on your mindnightpaw!your mentor is greythorn"the leader announced.
"come at me!" greythorn said in the training area."SWAP" midnightpaw swiped and knock him 2 feet away and she fell with a THUMP."good but thats bad for the person training you." she said laughing.
"pounce!"greythorn whispered and "THUMP" midnightpaw fell to the ground.her hands around a shrew."good!"her mentor praised her."you caught that!" said the apprentice she first met."wow your good" he praised her.
"HIISSSSSSS" she heard she turned to see bloodclan."oh no!"she shouted.the warriors ran to fight.midnightpaw stood there, frozen with fear."COME ON" she came back hearing those words from the apprentice and the apprentice 3/4 of the way to the fight had a cat behind him.one problem.the cat was from bloodclan."watch out she screamed.but it was to late with one hit the little apprentice went flying.midnightpaw ran over and felt the tiny warriors pulse.it was faint but there was a heartbeat.she grabbed his scruff and dragged him to the medicine den."im not sure if he'll make it.it will depend on his strength." the medicine cat said sadly." :'(DONT LEAVE ME" cried into the apprentices fur.
she sat there crying untill she felt something on her ear."why are you crying?"she relized that the apprentice was beside her licking her ear." :-[you got hit by a bloodclan warrior" she sniffed "the medicine cat said you might not make it.""starclan told me it wasn't my time to go" he meowed licking her ear."im fine"he smiled.
When they got back out of the medicine den everything was back to normal.the leader came up “your awake” “ya” “how are you doing” “im fine” he said.”good” she said “i don’t want to lose someone”.she jumped on the rock.”during that fight we almost lost snowpaw, a young apprentice.we did well in that fight.i am proud of all of you.”that night midnightpaw went to sleep early and had a strange dream.
“HELP ME” followed by a mouthful of water.then all a sudden something dragged her out.it was a warrior she had never saw before.”hello young apprentice” the warrior said. “you have a adventure ahead of you” “who are you what do you mean?” “wake up midnightpaw.time for training.” It was greythorn. When they got to the entrance the leader called them. “do you want to go to the gathering tonight?” “YES” midnightpaw screamed.”good” “do you think she is ready to come?” “yes” greythorn replied.”good” they hunted and caught 2 mice,2 rabbits, and 3 shrews.they came back.”wow your good” snowpaw walked up.”are you going to the gathering to?” he asked.”ya” she said.”ill see you then I guess”he said walking away.”I want to talk to the leader” she told greythorn and ran to her den.”come in” a voice said.it was the leader.I had ac dream she said when she stepped in.”a cat that was pure black said I had a adventure ahead of me.””the black cat is a warrior named nightfall.she died 7 moons ago.”then how was she in my dream?””when cats die they go to starclan right?” “ya” “well they can come to us in dreams.” “oh”
That night the gathering was normal.when they got back midnight paw told snowpaw about her dream.
2 moons later.
“tonight we are here to change 2 apprentices into warriors.Greythorn do you think that midnight paw is ready?” “yes” he said proudly.”then for now on you are midnightlove!and whitetiger do you think snowpaw is ready?” “yes” she said proudly. Then for now on you are snowfall!” after that everything was normal but one thing.midnightlove had 3 kits with snowfall.(and if you didn’t notice me call snowfall him and he yes he is a boy.)
made by spottedshadow
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"it looks like a ballerina jumping and falling" said smoke.
even though smoke is a girl they named her that.she was sitting at the window that evening watching the storm.
"you are clueless" spat jay
"no im not" smoke spat back.
"rain meanscolder weather" jay spat walking up to smoke.
"soooooo" "sooo we might not go outside" " i will!" smoke said jumping down.she went over and scratched the door.
"OK" he yelled opening the door.she padded out.
"i think i will explore farther today" she said to herself as she padded away.
"GET AWAY" she heard a cat spit.she turned around to see windclan patrols."im just wondering around"she said in a weak voice crouched down with her tail between her legs."get out of here" they spat." "she cried as she ran farther till she reached a river where she stopped to drink."HISSSSSSSSs" she turned to see a riverclan warrior."please dont hurt me" she cried."please" she beg."just go away he spat.tail tucked she huried off.
she stopped at the sunning rocks."hello" she heard a voice.it sounded friendly but stern.she turned to seea apprentice of thunderclan."h-hi" her voice shaken by being so scared.
"you look like youve saw a ghost" she heard when she saw a warrior step up from behind the apprentice."i gotta go ill be right back" she said stepping back and she turned around and ran."should i trust them?" she thought.then "WHACK" she felt a paw hit her neck.it was a rogue cat.she yolwed and swung her paw and striked him in the cheek.he yolwed and "WHAM" the warrior she found earlier wacked him down."lets get you to the medicine" den the warrior said grabbing her by the scruff.
"the wound is deep but will heal." the medicine cat said putting meddicine on the wound.whats a kit like you doin wondering around here?what clan are you from?" the apprentice asked."im not from any clan and im can go outside." smoke meowed."your a kittypet!" the apprentice said eyes widened."i guess" she meowed with confusion.
"but i like it here better.""oh""well im off"she said standing but falling."your to weak yet young kit"the medicine cat meowed."well what do we have here?" the leader said steppping in."how about you stay here then.""REALLY"said smoke."yep but come"the leader said stepping out.the kit stammered and got up and folowed him.they stepped into the nursery."this is where you will sleep.""woooow" smoke meaowed.she went to sleep.while she slept the leader announced that there was a new kit."your new name is midnightkit"
few moons later
"tonight we are proud to make a kit a apprentice."the leader annownced."midnightkit was your old name but for now on your mindnightpaw!your mentor is greythorn"the leader announced.
"come at me!" greythorn said in the training area."SWAP" midnightpaw swiped and knock him 2 feet away and she fell with a THUMP."good but thats bad for the person training you." she said laughing.
"pounce!"greythorn whispered and "THUMP" midnightpaw fell to the ground.her hands around a shrew."good!"her mentor praised her."you caught that!" said the apprentice she first met."wow your good" he praised her.
"HIISSSSSSS" she heard she turned to see bloodclan."oh no!"she shouted.the warriors ran to fight.midnightpaw stood there, frozen with fear."COME ON" she came back hearing those words from the apprentice and the apprentice 3/4 of the way to the fight had a cat behind him.one problem.the cat was from bloodclan."watch out she screamed.but it was to late with one hit the little apprentice went flying.midnightpaw ran over and felt the tiny warriors pulse.it was faint but there was a heartbeat.she grabbed his scruff and dragged him to the medicine den."im not sure if he'll make it.it will depend on his strength." the medicine cat said sadly." :'(DONT LEAVE ME" cried into the apprentices fur.
she sat there crying untill she felt something on her ear."why are you crying?"she relized that the apprentice was beside her licking her ear." :-[you got hit by a bloodclan warrior" she sniffed "the medicine cat said you might not make it.""starclan told me it wasn't my time to go" he meowed licking her ear."im fine"he smiled.
When they got back out of the medicine den everything was back to normal.the leader came up “your awake” “ya” “how are you doing” “im fine” he said.”good” she said “i don’t want to lose someone”.she jumped on the rock.”during that fight we almost lost snowpaw, a young apprentice.we did well in that fight.i am proud of all of you.”that night midnightpaw went to sleep early and had a strange dream.
“HELP ME” followed by a mouthful of water.then all a sudden something dragged her out.it was a warrior she had never saw before.”hello young apprentice” the warrior said. “you have a adventure ahead of you” “who are you what do you mean?” “wake up midnightpaw.time for training.” It was greythorn. When they got to the entrance the leader called them. “do you want to go to the gathering tonight?” “YES” midnightpaw screamed.”good” “do you think she is ready to come?” “yes” greythorn replied.”good” they hunted and caught 2 mice,2 rabbits, and 3 shrews.they came back.”wow your good” snowpaw walked up.”are you going to the gathering to?” he asked.”ya” she said.”ill see you then I guess”he said walking away.”I want to talk to the leader” she told greythorn and ran to her den.”come in” a voice said.it was the leader.I had ac dream she said when she stepped in.”a cat that was pure black said I had a adventure ahead of me.””the black cat is a warrior named nightfall.she died 7 moons ago.”then how was she in my dream?””when cats die they go to starclan right?” “ya” “well they can come to us in dreams.” “oh”
That night the gathering was normal.when they got back midnight paw told snowpaw about her dream.
2 moons later.
“tonight we are here to change 2 apprentices into warriors.Greythorn do you think that midnight paw is ready?” “yes” he said proudly.”then for now on you are midnightlove!and whitetiger do you think snowpaw is ready?” “yes” she said proudly. Then for now on you are snowfall!” after that everything was normal but one thing.midnightlove had 3 kits with snowfall.(and if you didn’t notice me call snowfall him and he yes he is a boy.)
made by spottedshadow
words:1,044