Post by Thinking of you ♥ on Feb 20, 2008 14:10:43 GMT -5
Characters:
Bella-Kittypet
Chloe-kittypet
Marie-two-leg
Leah-two-leg
Mike-two-leg
Cheryl-two-leg
Joe-two-leg
Breanna-two-leg (her name is spelled that way on purpose)
Loren-two-leg (her name is spelled that way on purpose too)
Albert-two-leg
Abby (Abigale)-kittypet
This story is in first person, Leah is the main character so she's telling the story. This is based o a true story, the dialogue may not be exact.
Hi my name is Leah and this story took place on October 18, 2004, exactly two days after my birthday. This is a story about the day I will never forget.
Seconds before the school bell rang everyone rushed to the door anticipating that sound made us all free. Finally, the bell rang. I rushed to meet my friend, Loren. We were trying to plan for me to go to her house. She was going to go to the vet because her cat, Abby, had a feline cancer. As we walked we spotted Loren's dad, Albert. "Hi Dad, can Leah come over?" she asked with a grin on her face. "Of course, she is always welcome at our house. This is on one condition her parents agree too," Albert replied. Loren and I walked away to ask my dad, Mike. "Hey Dad, I have a question for you. Can I go over to Loren's house?" I pleaded. "I'm very sorry, not today. I have a surprise for you at home," Mike replied. Mike and I walked together to the car. "Can I have a clue what this surprise is?" I asked. "Nope I promised I wouldn't say a thing." Mile said with confidence. We both got in the car and Mike drove us home.
We got out of the car and walked to the porch. "Ok are you ready? Close you eyes!" Mike exclaimed. I closed my eyes and he led me into the house. "You can open them now," he said. I slowly opened my eye lids; right in front of me was a BIG SCREEN TV. I was so excited; I couldn't wait to try it out. I felt like a little kid again. I jumped on the couch and turned on the TV. Later, I went out to the garage to get cat food for Bella and Chloe. As I walked outside Chloe ran for the food but Bella was just sitting there. I patted her on the head then went back into the house. I went into my room and started my homework, when I was half done, I went to get a snack and watch more TV. I watched TV until my mom, Cheryl, got home. As she walked in the house she asked me " Leah why is Bella in the cat house, there is blood surrounding her." "I had no idea," I said really worried. I went outside to see what she was talking about. I picked her up and sat her on my lap. She had dirt all over her and she smelled really bad. She meowed painfully at me so I set her down and went back into the house. My sister, Marie was right there "Marie I think Bella is really hurt come out side with me," I told her. We both walked outside. I picked up Bella, and Marie saw that she was dirty and she smelt bad. Bella meow two times with such a pain I could cry. She got up and walked away, Marie and I saw what was wrong. "Oh my gosh!" Marie said.
Tears flooded my eyes; I couldn't believe what I just saw. Bella was all torn up. It looked as if she was inside out. Everything was bloody; ants were all over her even inside of her. There was like a whole at her rear end. Her tail was only on her body buy a stand of skin. I could never get this site out of my mind. I loved Bella she was a friend to me and I could never replace her. This site was disgusting!
I ran into the house, I told Cheryl all about Bella. Her and my brother, Joe, went to vet with her. During the anticipating moments I was in my room crying my eyes out. I finally got the nerve to call my friend, Breanna, but she wasn't there. I felt horrible. I tried to call another friend, Loren, and no one even picked up the phone. After that, I just gave up; I didn't try to call anyone else. I just waited till Joe and Cheryl came home.
About a half hour later, they came back. I looked out the window, no Bella. I knew what the answer would be if I asked what happened. They would say she was put to sleep. That expression always made me mad, why couldn't they say she was dead? Anyway, Cheryl broke the news to me and I couldn't handle it.
The next day when I went to school my 2 best friends were absent. It was horrifying, I felt like crying the whole day. Loren was absent because her cat died, and Breanna was sick.
Every story has a happy ending. About a month later I got a new cat, Flash. I love him very much and he has really helped me not worry about Bella. "Her love is like the wind; you can't see it but you can feel it." a quote from a Walk To Remember.
Now, as you know I mentioned a cat named Chloe. She ran away a couple of months after we got Flash. We looked for her for a very long time. No trace of her anywhere. We figured she was run over by a car.
My Aunt gave us a cat with the name of Teddy. We received him when he was 13 years old. That is very old for a cat. We only had him for a couple of months. He was run over by some idiot right in front of my house. He died the day before Easter. My parents didn’t even tell me until Easter. A couple day later, on the 19, we received a 2 week old kitten. We didn’t know whether it was a boy or girl, so we named it Alex for a boy or girl. After about a month, we found out that it was a he. To this day I love him so much.
Word Count: 1,060
Bella-Kittypet
Chloe-kittypet
Marie-two-leg
Leah-two-leg
Mike-two-leg
Cheryl-two-leg
Joe-two-leg
Breanna-two-leg (her name is spelled that way on purpose)
Loren-two-leg (her name is spelled that way on purpose too)
Albert-two-leg
Abby (Abigale)-kittypet
This story is in first person, Leah is the main character so she's telling the story. This is based o a true story, the dialogue may not be exact.
Hi my name is Leah and this story took place on October 18, 2004, exactly two days after my birthday. This is a story about the day I will never forget.
Seconds before the school bell rang everyone rushed to the door anticipating that sound made us all free. Finally, the bell rang. I rushed to meet my friend, Loren. We were trying to plan for me to go to her house. She was going to go to the vet because her cat, Abby, had a feline cancer. As we walked we spotted Loren's dad, Albert. "Hi Dad, can Leah come over?" she asked with a grin on her face. "Of course, she is always welcome at our house. This is on one condition her parents agree too," Albert replied. Loren and I walked away to ask my dad, Mike. "Hey Dad, I have a question for you. Can I go over to Loren's house?" I pleaded. "I'm very sorry, not today. I have a surprise for you at home," Mike replied. Mike and I walked together to the car. "Can I have a clue what this surprise is?" I asked. "Nope I promised I wouldn't say a thing." Mile said with confidence. We both got in the car and Mike drove us home.
We got out of the car and walked to the porch. "Ok are you ready? Close you eyes!" Mike exclaimed. I closed my eyes and he led me into the house. "You can open them now," he said. I slowly opened my eye lids; right in front of me was a BIG SCREEN TV. I was so excited; I couldn't wait to try it out. I felt like a little kid again. I jumped on the couch and turned on the TV. Later, I went out to the garage to get cat food for Bella and Chloe. As I walked outside Chloe ran for the food but Bella was just sitting there. I patted her on the head then went back into the house. I went into my room and started my homework, when I was half done, I went to get a snack and watch more TV. I watched TV until my mom, Cheryl, got home. As she walked in the house she asked me " Leah why is Bella in the cat house, there is blood surrounding her." "I had no idea," I said really worried. I went outside to see what she was talking about. I picked her up and sat her on my lap. She had dirt all over her and she smelled really bad. She meowed painfully at me so I set her down and went back into the house. My sister, Marie was right there "Marie I think Bella is really hurt come out side with me," I told her. We both walked outside. I picked up Bella, and Marie saw that she was dirty and she smelt bad. Bella meow two times with such a pain I could cry. She got up and walked away, Marie and I saw what was wrong. "Oh my gosh!" Marie said.
Tears flooded my eyes; I couldn't believe what I just saw. Bella was all torn up. It looked as if she was inside out. Everything was bloody; ants were all over her even inside of her. There was like a whole at her rear end. Her tail was only on her body buy a stand of skin. I could never get this site out of my mind. I loved Bella she was a friend to me and I could never replace her. This site was disgusting!
I ran into the house, I told Cheryl all about Bella. Her and my brother, Joe, went to vet with her. During the anticipating moments I was in my room crying my eyes out. I finally got the nerve to call my friend, Breanna, but she wasn't there. I felt horrible. I tried to call another friend, Loren, and no one even picked up the phone. After that, I just gave up; I didn't try to call anyone else. I just waited till Joe and Cheryl came home.
About a half hour later, they came back. I looked out the window, no Bella. I knew what the answer would be if I asked what happened. They would say she was put to sleep. That expression always made me mad, why couldn't they say she was dead? Anyway, Cheryl broke the news to me and I couldn't handle it.
The next day when I went to school my 2 best friends were absent. It was horrifying, I felt like crying the whole day. Loren was absent because her cat died, and Breanna was sick.
Every story has a happy ending. About a month later I got a new cat, Flash. I love him very much and he has really helped me not worry about Bella. "Her love is like the wind; you can't see it but you can feel it." a quote from a Walk To Remember.
Now, as you know I mentioned a cat named Chloe. She ran away a couple of months after we got Flash. We looked for her for a very long time. No trace of her anywhere. We figured she was run over by a car.
My Aunt gave us a cat with the name of Teddy. We received him when he was 13 years old. That is very old for a cat. We only had him for a couple of months. He was run over by some idiot right in front of my house. He died the day before Easter. My parents didn’t even tell me until Easter. A couple day later, on the 19, we received a 2 week old kitten. We didn’t know whether it was a boy or girl, so we named it Alex for a boy or girl. After about a month, we found out that it was a he. To this day I love him so much.
Word Count: 1,060
